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Sohni's Mahiwal

 

•Chaar log

I have always hoped the afterlife doesn't come with any rituals or laws. No restrictions, no permissions and no "Chaar log kya kahenge"
Maybe then Sohni would finally meet her Mahiwal.

The Chenab river would no longer exist. The earthen pot would no longer exist. The boundaries would fade. And there would be only one thing visible more than ever – Love.

Their gaze wouldn't have to break. Their hands wouldn't have to separate. Their souls wouldn't detach.


•Jeete jee yaar us paar hai
Mauth mein tum aur main dono ek hai


In life– Love remains out of reach.
Far away on the opposite shore, with the river in between. A river that's built of rules, of customs. A river whose waves scream the names that the world gives us.

But the pot must melt.
And no, it isn't defeat. It's the first step of being one, of being whole.

In death– You are me, I am you. Our souls tied together with the thread of fate, The thread which no longer remains tangled in the laws of life and death.


•Duniya lakeeron mein dhundti reh gyi- kaahani unki..
Ek daastan jo lehron ne likhi thi.


The world still searches for them in lines, in scriptures, while their story lies in every curl the Chenab makes. 

The hands of the world tried to hold them. But their love wasn't to be bound by the walls– the barriers society put up in the name of honour.
Two hearts– tied in the knots of destiny. How will the borders of shame ever confine them?

Perhaps, the afterlife for them is simply this

A place where waves remember

what the world tried to erase.


•Oneness

Sohni and Mahiwal isn't a heartbreak story for me. It's the truth of love– An act of Rebellion.
A rebellion against every voice that said “no” and every time someone mistook their love for sin.
The purest form of love was defiance. And the bravest form of love was protest. A war- against every tradition, every norm set up in the name of izzat.

The river didn't drown them– it completed them. It remained the eternal witness of their love. It became the only path that led them to each other- permanently.

When the pot dissolved, they thought she had lost. But that night, Sohni crossed more than a river– She crossed into a place where no law could ever deny her love. She reached a place where the world and its limits couldn't follow her.

Sohni Mahiwal– They must have surrendered to the waves. 
But they refused to surrender their love.
Because even drowning feels easier than separation.
That's Strength. That's the power of love.

And just like that
Some love stories find their happy ending in eternity– Their end, their beginning.
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